by Clara Ryan, Fourth Grade, Ohatchee Elementary
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Hi, my name is Jake and today I am going to a big rollercoaster! Mom pulled up to the park. “We’re here,” she said. I jumped out of the car and ran toward the rollercoasters. Then there was a huge rollercoaster. I told Mom I so wanted to ride that thing, but Mom said we have to ride the kiddy rides with my little sister. I totally hated her! So I rode about a billion kiddy rides!

Finally Mom said “You can go ride the rides you want.”

“Yeah,” I said, “Thank you, Mom!”

“Go,” said Mom.

I ran to that rollercoaster but, guess what, the line was like a mile long. So I waited and waited till finally I was next. Then the commander said “Next!” I ran to the first seat! And, guess what, the ride started but on the first loopity loop I found out I was not buckled and, bam, I was gone, disappeared! Then the commander immediately stopped the ride and helped everybody off!

My mom heard about the accident and she freaked out, everybody was looking for me but really nobody knew that I was not on earth. I was on Mars with a strange creature. He was bossing me around, he was mean and cruel, and I missed my mom. I wanted to go home but one problem, my house is on Earth and I’m on Mars.

It’s been five years on Mars. Now it’s night. I am going to creep out of Mars. That night I built a rocket ship and I started it up and blast off. I then landed on Earth. I had no clue where I was on earth. Then I saw a farmer. I told him I was lost and he told me I was in Canada. I said, “I live in Florida, can you take me there?” He said, “Sure.” I said, “Thank you.” He did not answer or move. I said “What’s wrong?”

He pointed up to the sky. Then I looked up. It was a UFO and it was getting closer and closer! We started to run to the airport. We got there just in time. Then we got on the plane and in no time we were in Florida. My mom was there. We ran to each other. She hugged me and said, “Where were you?” I said, “Long story!”
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