Evil Dead
by Malik Guthrie, 4th grade, Ohatchee Elementary
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It was 1973. Four kids were walking. Their names were Tommy, Selina, Alex and Britteny. They were walking at night. Somebody started to laugh. But it wasn’t none of them. Alex said, “What was that.” Tommy said, “I don’t know but who wants to in the abandoned house.” Alex said, “No way I’m going in there.” Then Britteny said, “Then go home you coward.” So he did. Then Tommy said, “Are y’all ready?” Then Selina said, “Ya we’re ready!” So they all went in the house. It was very dark. There were weird sounds. A lot. They kept on walking, then they came up to three hallways.

Tommy said, “Y’all want to split up?” Britteny said, “Ya but I want to stay with Selina.” Tommy said, “OK.” Tommy went in the third hallway. And Britteny, Selina went in the first hallway. Tommy was scared but then he said, “There’s nothing.” So he kept on walking. Then he heard a scream. So he went running where he heard the scream. Then he said, “I was probably hearing things.” So he turned around and he saw glowing red eyes. Then it backed off.

He turned around and saw the Devil. He started to scream. He started to run, then he bumped into Selina and Britteny. Britteny said, “Hey Tommy I thought you were gonna leave but you didn’t and that’s a good thing cause I have to kill you.” Tommy and Selina looked at her and they both said, “That’s a funny joke.” Britteny said, “I’m not joking, I’ve been here a long time looking for you and I did. I’m the Devil’s daughter.”

Then she said, “I’m the one who planned this. I wanted to kill all of y’all but Alex read my plan and the reason right now. But I sent some demons after him and so he’s dead just like you’re gonna be.” She lunged at him and he moved really fast. She started to run after him, then he stopped. He saw that he was blocked by dead bodies. Britteny found him and said, “You’re dead now.” Then he was never seen again.
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